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Old 04-24-2024, 11:48 AM
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Originally Posted by DownOnRodeo View Post
I welcome this untitled addition to the American poetry canon.

The sparing use of pronouns engenders poignant verisimilitude.

And scansion is aided by the flawless employment of rambolic blathameter.

In a mere fifty lines, so much is said -- but also, so little.

Brava.
I disagree. The scansion would be aided if the poem were haploid. But in this case it's diploid.
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